Thursday, November 1, 2007

da shadow of the lively life....

life is not so easy as it seems to be...
frnz..cum n frnz go..
life sumtyms feels synonymous to a wallet....da notes come n da notes go...
n wen..ur left wid no single note..depictin dat indian essence....ur da one in despair n ditress..
u feel lik..borrowin da notes....
u feel lyk..aquirin dem...as soon as possible...
u feel lyk....life is impossible widout da silver n green notes.......
u feel...ur helpless...
same way.....life goes..wen it comes to frnz....
wen..u hav..frnz..who seem true to u...
ur da happiest person....
but wen....
da frnz...seem to leave u behind...
u start missin dem..n der prized company....
u feel helpless.......
ur life is like an empty wallet....
all left alone..
wid no1 to to rejuvenate wid!!

life in manipal fr me.....sumtyms seems to be so.....
wen i sit bak...al alone..n thnk o da tyms...spent wid ma frnz......
sumhw...i feel...dat i neva had ny frnz.....n mark ma wrdz.....
sumtyms.......
n dats juz sumtyms!!
bt stil derz dis feelin.....
if i wana share sumtin.....wid sum1...i juz get a feelin....dat its nt possible to do so.....dey wer nevr dat close....dat i can thnk o sharin....
but....den i thnk..
its juz a waste thnkin al dis......
sumtyms...life can be livd in da shadows.......
n sumtyms....
its better dat lyf is livd in da shadows.....
hav felt...dat i shud stop thnkin dat deep.....
n thnkin....wel....i thnk i juz hav few frnz.....
with whom.....at least...da lyf can go easy.......

sumtyms.....its we..who neda rise in life.....
n nt always...expect oders to rise upto our levels.....

so......expectin a lyf......i li'l less in da shadows........
hav fun all u ppl out der...
n if u feel...dat ur feelin...da need o a close frn.....
juz close ur eyes...
n thnk bt ur lyf.....
thnk bt da happier moments.....
dats da best solutn.....
n ul feel.....life's da best gift u hav ever had!!!!!!!!!

5 comments:

Prameya Khemka said...

well i.ve read some of dranzers poems earlier...... and loved them and hated them...... dey gave me a sense of pain..... they betrayed emotions.... i'd nvr thought that dranzer cud go beyond dat.... but unfortunately here, wid diz peice of text she's surpassed herself..... reachd a new level..... its got pain all rite but also a host of other things....... its got truth, its got pain, its got emotion, hppyness, sadness, trust and mistrust, its got such a lot of things dat i cannot put into wordzz coz m not gud wid wordzz newayzzzz........ to speak it out in short.... its got LIFE!!! well for diz peice of text i bow my head in reverence to u dranzer.... and for those dat know me evn a bit.... they'll know dat this is sayin a lot.........

Unknown said...

i thnk
dats exaggeration!!
m nt dat wel a writer!!!
bt thnx newaz!!!!
views appreciated!!!!!
;)

Prameya Khemka said...

ahumm..... opinions differ my friend..... opinions differ.....

Unknown said...

n is dis son of gawd sum1 i kno????
lik prameya or sum thn????? ;)

Prameya Khemka said...

well dunno..... might be..... might not be.... IDIOT!!!!..... ;)